We wrote a recount about our evacuation experience.
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On Friday we went up a hill because we got a Tsunami warning. I got picked up but when we were walking up the hill I felt scared but then I felt safe. I went to the airport. There was a lot of kids. I saw my aunty and we heard another warning. I thought, "what is going to happen next?" I wondered how long the walk was. There was nothing to do!
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On Friday we went up a hill because we got a Tsunami warning I got pekit up bet wen were walking up the hill I falt scared bet then I falt safe I went to the airport their was a Loet of kids I sowr my anet and we heard a another warning I ThInkd wot is going to hapun next.I waned how Long was The walk The walk was 20 minutes TheIr was nafing To bo
That would've been scary alright Amelia. Remember everything you had to do whilst you were evacuating incase it should ever happen again, and always listen to instructions from the grown ups and be calm x Next time you at the airport jump on a plane and come visit cuzzy Kairo ��
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