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We are writing about our experience at the Mahuika Show.
Once upon a time there were two girls cold sissy and kahu sissy was raning down and up the hall way and then kahu cot sissy thir come a Masders guy runing down the holy way. sissy and kuhu was wandring wot is thet nowes I don't no and the guy was Potiki. sissy asked Potiki to show me the way to Mahuika and then pukeko come to capture Potiki and took hem to Mahuika. sissy and kahu sane a song togther and Mahuika saved their nana. Then the fire was out and they went home and waited for thier nana to turn back to normal and I think it was inckridabl and amazing.
Next steps
- Re read each sentence - does it make sense?
- Full stops and capital letters
- Correct your 'fast' words.
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