Rona and the Moon

 WALT re-tell the story about Rona and the Moon in our own words.

First Draft - Mahuika Show

21/05/21/28/05/21

We are writing about our experience at the Mahuika Show. 

Once upon a time there were two girls cold sissy and kahu sissy was raning down and up the hall way and then kahu cot sissy thir come a  Masders guy runing down the holy way. sissy and kuhu was wandring wot is thet nowes I don't no and the  guy was Potiki. sissy asked Potiki to show me the way to Mahuika  and then pukeko come to capture Potiki and took hem to Mahuika. sissy and kahu sane a song togther and Mahuika saved their nana. Then the fire was out and they went home and waited for thier nana to turn back to normal and I think it was inckridabl and amazing.

Next steps

• Re read each sentence - does it make sense?
• Full stops and capital letters
• Correct your 'fast' words.

My Mum

WALT to write a description of our mum using precise words to create an image in our readers minds.

My mum is the best mum ever and I am going to tell you about her. Her name is Amy. She likes our dog Ruma. She has brown shiny eyes like me and freckles. She likes wearing sunglasses.

She never goes for runs. We like to go to Fiji  together. She is the best  mum ever because she is lovely and happy. We like to watch shaland street  together and she is beautiful every day. I love my mum as much as she loves me. I am trying to say my mum is the best mum ever!!! 

Writing ANZAC Day

We have ANZAC Day to remember the soldiers that died in the war we wear poppies and not roses because poppies were the first to grow back at the war. We go to the dawn parades to always remember them. I will remember them and to remember my Great Great Grandfather every ANZAC Day .I will always wear my Great Great Grandfather medals. 

Lest we Forget.

Statistics

 WALT ask a question for data collection, create a survey to carry out a simple investigation, make a tally chart and create a bar graph.

A bar graph needs a Title and labels. We have to ask a question to find out information (data) then we can put it on a graph.

NZ Birds

 Learning Intention - I am learning to identify some facts about New Zealand birds. 

We are learning about NZ birds and I mad a google Slid.

The Great Reading Adventure

We are learning to write a moment in time about our class assembly, 'The Great Reading Adventure'.

Second Draft

The day had finally come I was nervous I felt Proud Duffy and scruffy were The main characters. Butterflies went crazy in my stomach there were so much People watching There were 4 friends and I was number 4. The friends were Alaris, Tame, Levi and me. I can see all The People were walking in Through The Door We were singing And dancing Too. we all were standing up when The music stopped we all sat down.I said my favourite Books are about plants I love monsteras And This Book Tells me how To look after Them Then it was The BFG group. Donna was Sophie and Ryan was the BFG with all the another giants.